GREAT DRAFT, MAYBE INSTEAD OF USING A BUNCH OF WORDS TO HELP DESCRIBE YOU, TRY TO USE A LINE FROM YOUR POEM INSTEAD. BECAUSE THIS IS ALMOST TOO METAPHOR-ISH. MS(3+)
I CAN SEE THAT YOU WROTE ABOUT VIOLET IN YOUR POEM AND USED WORDS TO DESCRIBE YOURSELF (OR THAT WERE ALSO USED IN THE POEM), BUT YOU MIGHT WANT TO MAKE IT AL ITTLE ELSS OBVIOUS ABOUT WHAT YOU'RE ALLUDING TO. MAYBE YOU COULD USE SOMETHING SYMBOLIC IN PLACE OF THE WORDS? AND OMG IF YOU CAPS ME I CAPS YOU DON'T THREATEN ME #THUGLYFE
Very interesting graphic Chelsea. It's actually blended in very well. Good job. Like Zavala said, don't use a bunch of words, but instead use a line from your poem. That way, It'll look nicer and less crowded on your graphic. #naturalbeauty
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GREAT DRAFT, MAYBE INSTEAD OF USING A BUNCH OF WORDS TO HELP DESCRIBE YOU, TRY TO USE A LINE FROM YOUR POEM INSTEAD. BECAUSE THIS IS ALMOST TOO METAPHOR-ISH. MS(3+)
I CAN SEE THAT YOU WROTE ABOUT VIOLET IN YOUR POEM AND USED WORDS TO DESCRIBE YOURSELF (OR THAT WERE ALSO USED IN THE POEM), BUT YOU MIGHT WANT TO MAKE IT AL ITTLE ELSS OBVIOUS ABOUT WHAT YOU'RE ALLUDING TO. MAYBE YOU COULD USE SOMETHING SYMBOLIC IN PLACE OF THE WORDS? AND OMG IF YOU CAPS ME I CAPS YOU DON'T THREATEN ME #THUGLYFE
Very interesting graphic Chelsea. It's actually blended in very well. Good job. Like Zavala said, don't use a bunch of words, but instead use a line from your poem. That way, It'll look nicer and less crowded on your graphic. #naturalbeauty
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