Saturday, April 26, 2014
Monday, April 21, 2014
Macbeth Rough Draft
The book Macbeth written by Shakespeare allows readers to feel and think different emotions and ideas from the beginning to the end of the book. Macbeth himself stops at nothing until he accomplishes his goal until he can’t go on anymore. And in this case, the only motive that actually stopped Macbeth was to kill him and end his life. Throughout the story, you learn that the extremes he goes; for example killing others, is not even enough until he is at the top. The story, Macbeth, revolves around a society where greed can overpower ones desire for their ambition/goal.
The first part of the book makes you feel as if Macbeth is weak because of an event that happened to try and make his wife happy. In the story, Lady Macbeth plans, "When Duncan is asleep - and he’ll sleep soundly after his hard day’s journey - I’ll ply his two officers with so much drink their memories will be fogged and their brains addled. When they are drunk and sleeping like pigs, what can’t we do to the unguarded Duncan? What can’t we blame on his sodden officers? They’ll get the blame for our great murder.” (1:7:pg.59) At first, Macbeth was scared and hesitant on killing Duncan because he didn’t really want to, although his wife forced him to do it. Which showed that her mind was more focused on her goal than her husband's feelings about the idea. This gives us a perspective of such a drastic goal from a very persistent lady whose measures went as low to killing a person to get what she wants, which is sad because she’s probably a baby herself to do it .
During the middle of the story gives you second thoughts on who really is the guilty party to get what they want. Shakespeare wrote as Macbeth, "That's that. Banquo, if your soul is bound for heaven, it will reach there tonight!” (3:1:pg.103). This quote shows that Macbeth wants a person dead to become King, it’s not his wife who did the planning now. He is almost like his wife in the beginning, instead, he hired murderers to do the deed for him; just like his wife wanting him to kill Duncan instead of her. This perspective of Macbeth shows that greed can get in the way of one's ambition if they are that desperate, which is just as sad seeing that he went so low to actually hiring people.
At the end of the story, it proves that a person will risk their life to getting what they want because their desire for that one goal is all that matters to them in the end. From Macbeth’s perspective, Shakespeare wrote, "I'll fight till the flesh is hacked from my bones! Give me my armor!” (5:3:pg. 185). This quote shows that Macbeth will not give up until he has no flesh left on him, in other words, he’s willing to fight till his death because he’s come so far which motivates him even more to do so. Which is highly comprehensible seeing that at first it was his wife, now him, and now him putting his life on the line to give it his all. He may feel as though giving up means that he has plotted, killed others, and hired to kill others for him will be for nothing so he naturally puts the famous quote “over my dead body” into great use.
A society where greed can overpower ones desire for their goal happens, believe it or not. It’s not some ancient feeling that has never been experienced only in books or by a human being before. Macbeth shows that people will go to low measures to get what they always desired. Lady Macbeth wanted her husband to kill Duncan at first, then Macbeth wanted Banquo to be eliminated out of the picture so he hired murderers to do his deed, and now it came to the point that nearly all the remaining characters are against him so he gives it his all seeing that its all or nothing at the end of the book. Everyone has goals all throughout their lifetime whether it is big or small, but it is up to them on the process as to how they will want reach it.
Thursday, March 27, 2014
Macbeth Pre-reading Work
Macbeth
Anticipation Guide
Directions:
Read the following statements. Write if you agree or disagree. Write two
sentences and a personal experience to support your
thoughts about each statement. There are no right or wrong answers!
PART UNO
1. Behind every great man is a great
woman (every great man is supported, guided, helped and even pushed by a great
woman).
Agree.
I agree with this statement because women are more known to be thoughtful and gentler
than men, most of the time. I say ‘most of the time’ because not all women are
the same, they could be aggressive or gentle, or some could be less thoughtful
compared to men.
~I had
a friend who played with girls’ minds and feelings, but had a maternal figure
to push him into the right direction before it was too late.
2. Witches, demons, and evil spirits
actually exist.
Disagree.
I’m sure a whole lot of people believe in evil spirits whether they are
Catholic/Christian or not. I’m one of those who neither but still believe that
evil spirits do exist. Though I’m not too keen on considering witches and
demons actually do exist, unless hell counts as being related to demons.
~I
called out “Bloody Mary” three times in my bathroom with the lights off and me
towards the mirror at night, nothing happened (i was scared s***less though).
3. Sometimes it is necessary to do
something wrong to get what you want.
Agree.
Although, this statement depends on your reasoning, ergo “necessary”. If it’s
that important for you to bend the rules/laws for the good, then go for it.
~I
drove without receiving my permit from the office because my dad was dog tired
to continue driving (to be honest, it was only three miles and i didn’t bang
anything).
4. What goes around comes around
(karma).
Agree.
If someone did something bad or unnecessary, I believe they should get a taste
of their own medicine. I think most find it fair for others to be doing bad,
get out clean.
~I
tripped my sister in the mall and when we got back to the car, I slammed my
middle and ring fingers in the door.
5. Human beings are easily tempted by
things they want, even if it’s wrong.
Agree.
Though I hate to say it, it’s true because once you lose your self-control,
you’re done for. As much as you don’t want to do it, you either do it or at
least let the scenario unfold in your mind.
~I was
at the bank opening an account and I just thought of a large amount of money
stored in the back or upstairs. Of course I didn’t rob the bank, but I did
think about it. I couldn’t help it, I have watched many movies that included
robbing a bank.
6. If someone feels that the ruler/s of
his/her country is destroying the country, that person should try to overthrow
the ruler/s.
Disagree.
I understand that one person doesn’t agree with the way one is running the
system, but it’s not only you in the country, there are others as well. And
they should have an opinion for disliking the system or not.
~Some
people still feel as if Zimmerman was guilty during the trial. And I am one of
those people. He murdered an adolescent kid, shouldn’t there be justice for his
crime?
7. There are circumstances or events
that justify murdering someone.
Agree.
It majorly depends on the events that justifies murdering someone. For example,
a use of self-defense perhaps?
~I
haven’t murdered someone in my life but I have witnessed trials that related to
murder. Some defendants came out guilty and some came out innocent. It all
depends on the events or even your lawyer/attorney.
8. Success is worth any price you have
to pay.
Agree.
If you want to be successful out there, you need a marvelous job. Hopefully one
you enjoy doing. But education comes first. And money is part of the education
equation.
~I need
money for college. I work at McDonalds. Oh yeahhh, be jealous. Nuff’ said.
9. Kings are appointed by God, and they
rule as His representatives on Earth.
Disagree.
Kings come on their own free will. They should first get a choice, then get
voted in.
~King
William is or will be the King of his country due to ancestry, God didn’t
choose him.
10. Your astrological forecast (your horoscope) is a good
indicator of how your day will go.
Disagree.
I do read them, I just don’t want to believe them. What if it’s great but gives
me false hope during the week/day?
11. Traitors should be executed.
Disagree.
It depends on the events and reasoning’s as to why. Not an automatic punishment
that doesn’t give them a chance to explain him/herself.
~I went
against my parents will and unintentionally got a C instead of an A for my
grades. They didn’t execute me, they did ground me though. (*AHEM*JK you’re a
cool guy)
PART DOS
Partner:
Chelsea.
Once
you are done with a partner look at the following questions and answer them
together. Your answers need to be in complete sentences and you need to provide
what you and your partner discussed. PROVIDE AT LEAST A PARAGRAPH PER ANSWER.
Please list who your partner is.
1. Is
evil inherent in human nature? That is, are some people just “born evil,” or is
evil caused by circumstance or environment?
No.
Evil is not inherent in human nature. It is merely caused by the environment
that one is raised in or the circumstances they undergo. A person has a choice
to whether or not they want to be evil unless they are forced to under certain
conditions by another. For example, scientists did studies on twins that were
in different environments to observe their environmental influences. And after
a certain amount of time, they found that even though they were twins, they
were the complete opposite. This shows that whatever surroundings one is in,
the effects they have in the area affects the person growing up. And even
though they are once evil, you still can believe the fact that a person can
change if someone is there with them to help them throughout their recovering
journey.
2. Are
our lives determined by fate, or by the acts of our free will?
Some
people believe that God or fate determines our future and lives. But it’s based
on the acts of our free will. What we do affects us in both the present and
future. High school teachers say that whatever you do in high school will
affect you in the future. They’ve been young before so they obviously know what
they’re talking about. That’s why they push you to do best you can do in your
classes because it will also reflect the person you will be. Regardless if you
are already lazy or give up, you can still change. You can still be that
person you’ve been dreaming of but it’s the actions you will take to get there,
hence “acts of our free will”.
3. Is
redemption truly possible? That is, is it possible to commit an act of genuine
evil and truly recover from it?
Redemption
is nearly impossible. As said before, it depends on your future actions,
motives, and the effect it will have on others. To redeem yourself, it works in
a very slow but gradual process. Take each step little by little each day until
you’ve taken the further step possible. Then just do those little things here
and thereafter. You don’t need to continue to redeem yourself to everyone you
stirred wrong because they didn’t believe that your third or fourth try wasn’t
enough, as long as you believe that you yourself has become a better person
from before, you’re fine. You can be your own clean slate if no one else sees
the better in you.
4. Is
it possible to admire or respect a person whom you know has committed acts of
genuine evil?
Everyone
has a brain and a heart. They control what they think and feel. Not anyone
else. You can force them to change and stop the admiration and respect they
have for a person unless they genuinely feel that him or her self doesn’t
deserve their respect. You could try and manipulate the person but your chances
are a slim 50/50. So yes, it is possible.
5. Do
“the ends justify the means”? That is, if one uses morally evil methods to
acquire a goal, is that goal forever tainted or polluted by the actions one has
taken to achieve it?
Yes,
because that person was willing to go to the extremes to achieve that goal. If
it’s a goal that one will stop at nothing to achieve, then they will go to
drastic measures just to satisfy him or her self. And in this case, evil
methods will come into mind because they want it so bad. It’s not a simple “I
want that so I will do the things to get it without being morally wrong in
life”. If it was, then we wouldn’t have such strict laws and rules as well as
people helping them to enforce it. For example, if a nerdy tech geek wanted all
A’s on his transcripts but couldn’t because it was too late for him, then he
will use his tech skills to hack into the school’s system and somehow change
all of his grades to A’s. And that is a goal he has achieved, but went about it
in ways that would require his process tainted. A forever tainted goal.
Thursday, February 20, 2014
Group Leader Response LC #3
Humanity
The prisoners that were involved in the Holocaust, majority of the Jewish race, had to bear the experience of starving for more than a weak with no food or water that it made them lose faith in living, just how Elies' father felt; he wrote, "I can't go on, my son...Give me some water...".
Character
Elie and other prisoners would always depend on God in the beginning of the story, then when bad things start to happen, they would slowly lose their faith and hope in him in their chance of survival which he stated in his book, “"Where is God? Where is He?” someone behind me asked."
The prisoners that were involved in the Holocaust, majority of the Jewish race, had to bear the experience of starving for more than a weak with no food or water that it made them lose faith in living, just how Elies' father felt; he wrote, "I can't go on, my son...Give me some water...".
Character
Elie and other prisoners would always depend on God in the beginning of the story, then when bad things start to happen, they would slowly lose their faith and hope in him in their chance of survival which he stated in his book, “"Where is God? Where is He?” someone behind me asked."
Monday, February 10, 2014
Group Leader Response LC #1
1.
Critical Stance
Not knowing that the Jews were being relocated to concentration
camps set all over the country, they remained calm and came to terms with it
because they were misguided of the fact that they were told they were going to
be safe. Slowly, after noticing their hope dying down, they had to learn how to
adjust with their ties and privileges being cut off quickly with no notice at
all.
2.
Dialectical Journal Entries
Page 32
“Never shall I forget that night, the first night in camp,
which has turned my life into one long night.”
“Never shall I forget the little faces of the children,
whose bodies I saw turned into wreaths of smoke beneath a silent blue sky.”
These two quotes from the book has a repetition of the first
four words which emphasizes the fact of what he’s seen and experienced
throughout the first few days of the concentration camp is etched into his mind
and will never be erased and forgotten. No matter how hard he tries. We don’t
take into consideration of the fact that he’s our age and he goes through all
that while we just read and try to imagine it ourselves. The difference being
that we’re stuck with the thought of it while he’s in stuck with the
experience.
Page 37
“Had I changed so much then? So quickly? Now remorse began
to gnaw at me.”
While being at the concentration camp, he slowly realizes
that he himself changes as well. Both physically and mentally. He would’ve
jumped at the moment his father got hit, but he never did. In other words, what’s
important about this quote is the fact that he’s changing at the camp before he
realizes it.
“A caption: “Warning. Danger of death.” Mockery: was there a
single place here where you were not in danger of death?”
The importance of this quote is the indeed mockery of it.
The situation he’s in shows that even though he’s in the worst case scenario
thought possible, he could add in a tiny, small ounce of humor. Being that fact
that it’s a life/death situation, he goes on and sees what god and fate has for
him.
Page 39
“I became A-7713. After that I had no other name.”
They were not only stripped of their important valuables in
the beginning, they were now known as letters and/or numbers. The lost their
identity seeing that they were not human beings in the eyes of the Germans
anymore.
Thursday, February 6, 2014
Tuesday, February 4, 2014
Elie Wiesel feat. Tiffany
Elie Wiesel
World
War II is known for being one of the most devastating, costly events in
history. With an unstable Germany on the rise lead by Adolf Hitler, many lost
their lives to what most today see as one of the most catastrophic incidents to
ever happen. Elie Wiesel, current day writer and Nobel Prize winner, is most
known for his works on his survival of the Holocaust in World War II. Wiesel,
at a young age, was taken from his Jewish home in Transylvania (later to be
named Romania) and moved to concentration camps with his family. Being one of
the active survivors of the Holocaust, he has given speeches, written books,
and taught about his experiences and hardships. His most known work, La Nuit, was published in 1958 and was
the first to include his memories during the war. After having such success
with the first book, he continued on to write forty more books with the same
basic information and experiences included in the previous, educating people
around the world of the encounters commonly found during the Holocaust.
Wiesel’s purpose for sharing his
knowledge with the world is to inform and educate everyone of the struggles and
hardships that people experienced during the war, specifically in the
perspective of the Jews. Thanks to his survival and writing skills, Wiesel has
published over forty books, delivered speeches, and taught classes about the
Holocaust, as well as events that lead up and followed. He also does classes
and seminars on Jewish practices and studies for those who want to learn more. Thanks
to his activism in today’s society, people can learn more about the Holocaust
and World War II, as well as the impact it could have on an individual if
something like this were to reoccur.
Bibliography:
• “Elie
Wiesel – Biographical”. Nobelprize.org. Nobel
Media AB 2013. Web. 4 Feb 2014. http://ww.nobelprize.org/nobel_prized/peace/laureates/1986/wiesel-bio.html
• "Elie Wiesel Biography." Bio.com.
A&E Networks Television, n.d. Web. 02 Feb. 2014. http://www.biography.com/people/elie-wiesel-9530714?page=1
• "The Elie Wiesel
Foundation for Humanity." The Elie Wiesel Foundation for Humanity.
N.p., n.d. Web. 04 Feb. 2014. http://www.eliewieselfoundation.org/eliewiesel.aspx
Thursday, January 30, 2014
Allusion Final
Eyes as dark as night
A nose unbelievably flat that people wonder if you can smell
No wonder they don't talk to me
I'm the the epitome of weird
But nevertheless, I'm strong willed on the inside
A family who has my back whenever I need them
Yet sometimes I think to myself it's not enough
I just want to be like everybody else
Normal
The ability to blend in would be nice
I mean, I can blend in alright
Into a background
Because that's what I'm good at
Hiding, running away so I don't have to face my problems altogether
Here and there, you would here them go 'where is your sister'
Where all introverts stay as their way to blocking out society
He suggests her room
And I give her props for stretching all the way just to check on me
Literally stretching
As if saving the world with her sidekick at her side wasn't tiring enough
But here I am
Back in my room
Wondering what to do next
Shall I turn invisible seeing that being socially withdrawn is my forte
Or
Should I just create a force field around me to continue to face the world alone
A nose unbelievably flat that people wonder if you can smell
No wonder they don't talk to me
I'm the the epitome of weird
But nevertheless, I'm strong willed on the inside
A family who has my back whenever I need them
Yet sometimes I think to myself it's not enough
I just want to be like everybody else
Normal
The ability to blend in would be nice
I mean, I can blend in alright
Into a background
Because that's what I'm good at
Hiding, running away so I don't have to face my problems altogether
Here and there, you would here them go 'where is your sister'
Where all introverts stay as their way to blocking out society
He suggests her room
And I give her props for stretching all the way just to check on me
Literally stretching
As if saving the world with her sidekick at her side wasn't tiring enough
But here I am
Back in my room
Wondering what to do next
Shall I turn invisible seeing that being socially withdrawn is my forte
Or
Should I just create a force field around me to continue to face the world alone
Monday, January 27, 2014
Sunday, January 26, 2014
Allusion Draft
Eyes as dark as night
A nose unbelievably flat that people wonder if you can smell
No wonder they don't talk to me
I'm the the epitome of weird
But nevertheless, I'm strong willed on the inside
A family who has my back whenever I need them
Yet sometimes I think to myself it's not enough
I just want to be like everybody else
Normal
The ability to blend in would be nice
I mean, I can blend in alright
Into a background
Because that's what I'm good at
Hiding, running away so I don't have to face my problems altogether
Here and there, you would here them go 'where is your sister'
Where all introverts stay as their way to blocking out society
He suggests her room
And I give her props for stretching all the way just to check on me
Literally stretching
As if saving the world with her sidekick at her side wasn't tiring enough
But here I am
Back in my room
Wondering what to do next
Shall I turn invisible seeing that being socially withdrawn is my forte
Or
Should I just create a force field around me to continue to face the world alone
A nose unbelievably flat that people wonder if you can smell
No wonder they don't talk to me
I'm the the epitome of weird
But nevertheless, I'm strong willed on the inside
A family who has my back whenever I need them
Yet sometimes I think to myself it's not enough
I just want to be like everybody else
Normal
The ability to blend in would be nice
I mean, I can blend in alright
Into a background
Because that's what I'm good at
Hiding, running away so I don't have to face my problems altogether
Here and there, you would here them go 'where is your sister'
Where all introverts stay as their way to blocking out society
He suggests her room
And I give her props for stretching all the way just to check on me
Literally stretching
As if saving the world with her sidekick at her side wasn't tiring enough
But here I am
Back in my room
Wondering what to do next
Shall I turn invisible seeing that being socially withdrawn is my forte
Or
Should I just create a force field around me to continue to face the world alone
Thursday, January 9, 2014
Monday, December 16, 2013
Thursday, December 12, 2013
Argument Essay Final
84-822a Lahaina St.
Waianae, HI, 96792
December 10, 2013
The Cab Hawaii
738 Kaheka Street Suite 201
Honolulu, Hawaii 96814
Dear Cab Hawaii,
You are well known to the island of Oahu for providing a mode of transportation to not just only the residents of the island, but to the tourists who take the time to choose to enjoy their time here. You make it an easier way for the people to get from one destination to another faster than the bus.
Despite all of this, the routes I've have been taken to get to many of my destinations have been brought to my attention. About a month or two ago, I had a very important assignment to complete for school which was located at Pearlridge Shopping Center. My current location to get to Pearlridge was Waikele Premium Outlets so I could make it more convenient for my cab driver to pick me up from instead of my residential street. I somewhat remember that I got picked up within the time restraint given to me over the phone
when calling for a cab. I do, however, clearly remember the route I was taken to get to my destination. And I was not very impressed with the route nor the ride.
Once I got into the cab, My driver confirmed and my name and destination in a pleasant way. But once we hit our first road while leaving, I noticed that I may given off my impression as a non-resident who wasn’t familiar with the island because he didn’t go straight to the freeway where we were aware of no traffic whatsoever, according to the radio. No, he went down Paiwa St. and kept going, passing the exit to the freeway and going straight to Kamehameha Highway. I was slowly feeling agitated because every time we were close to a stoplight, he would unusually slow down until the light turned yellow then red. And every time that happened, the price of my ride, located on the dashboard, kept rising. And all I could think about was the fact that he could’ve continued to actually go the speed limit he was always at.
So we arrived at Pearlridge within 25-30 minutes because he had "thought" I had said Uptown rather than Downtown when I clearly stated Downtown before we left Waikele. According to Google Maps, the longest a ride would ever have to take that was relative to my current location and destination was 15 to 20 minutes.
You may say that it is up to the cabdriver as to which route should be taken, but it should be automatic logic to take the quickest way to the destination. It is estimated that at least 87% percent of people would rather agree with the term, “the sooner the better’ or “the earlier the better”. It resembles the phrase, better safe than sorry. You’d rather be safe and be early rather than being sorry because you were late. Whether the situation varies from long routes to their destination or shipping of the items they order. What’s the point in taking a cab when the length of the ride would be as long as taking the bus? You’re taking the same long amount of time as a bus but paying more. I mean, you might as well take the bus right? Since it’s cheaper and the length of the ride would be the same as taking a cab. People see the cab more as an express bus. But it’s faster. Sure it may be more costly, but you’re getting there faster.
I understand economy nowadays is tough and being a working teenager I can say a lot. But cab drivers earn a lot considering their benefits. Not only do they get paid for their whole trip each time they drive their customer, they also receive tips. As well as being an employee; you also obtain a weekly or monthly salary while being employed at the CabHawaii.
I hope my letter not only thought of you to make slight changes to informing your employees about taking shorter routes, but understanding the fact that not only should you advise your drivers on taking shorter routes for residents, but for those who don't reside on the island as well. Tourism is one of Hawaii's biggest investments and it would be a shame for them to go back home and explain to their family that the rides they used to travel was long and expensive for them. Because then that would slowly but surely take away money from the state as well as turn customers away from using your company as a mode of transportation. Which no one would ever want for their company.
I hope that my letter had shed some light on an issue that occasionally happens to not just me, but to others also. And urges you to make immediate changes by some form of great action to keep your company in business.
Sincerely,
Chelsea Matanguihan
Waianae, HI, 96792
December 10, 2013
The Cab Hawaii
738 Kaheka Street Suite 201
Honolulu, Hawaii 96814
Dear Cab Hawaii,
You are well known to the island of Oahu for providing a mode of transportation to not just only the residents of the island, but to the tourists who take the time to choose to enjoy their time here. You make it an easier way for the people to get from one destination to another faster than the bus.
Despite all of this, the routes I've have been taken to get to many of my destinations have been brought to my attention. About a month or two ago, I had a very important assignment to complete for school which was located at Pearlridge Shopping Center. My current location to get to Pearlridge was Waikele Premium Outlets so I could make it more convenient for my cab driver to pick me up from instead of my residential street. I somewhat remember that I got picked up within the time restraint given to me over the phone
when calling for a cab. I do, however, clearly remember the route I was taken to get to my destination. And I was not very impressed with the route nor the ride.
Once I got into the cab, My driver confirmed and my name and destination in a pleasant way. But once we hit our first road while leaving, I noticed that I may given off my impression as a non-resident who wasn’t familiar with the island because he didn’t go straight to the freeway where we were aware of no traffic whatsoever, according to the radio. No, he went down Paiwa St. and kept going, passing the exit to the freeway and going straight to Kamehameha Highway. I was slowly feeling agitated because every time we were close to a stoplight, he would unusually slow down until the light turned yellow then red. And every time that happened, the price of my ride, located on the dashboard, kept rising. And all I could think about was the fact that he could’ve continued to actually go the speed limit he was always at.
So we arrived at Pearlridge within 25-30 minutes because he had "thought" I had said Uptown rather than Downtown when I clearly stated Downtown before we left Waikele. According to Google Maps, the longest a ride would ever have to take that was relative to my current location and destination was 15 to 20 minutes.
You may say that it is up to the cabdriver as to which route should be taken, but it should be automatic logic to take the quickest way to the destination. It is estimated that at least 87% percent of people would rather agree with the term, “the sooner the better’ or “the earlier the better”. It resembles the phrase, better safe than sorry. You’d rather be safe and be early rather than being sorry because you were late. Whether the situation varies from long routes to their destination or shipping of the items they order. What’s the point in taking a cab when the length of the ride would be as long as taking the bus? You’re taking the same long amount of time as a bus but paying more. I mean, you might as well take the bus right? Since it’s cheaper and the length of the ride would be the same as taking a cab. People see the cab more as an express bus. But it’s faster. Sure it may be more costly, but you’re getting there faster.
I understand economy nowadays is tough and being a working teenager I can say a lot. But cab drivers earn a lot considering their benefits. Not only do they get paid for their whole trip each time they drive their customer, they also receive tips. As well as being an employee; you also obtain a weekly or monthly salary while being employed at the CabHawaii.
I hope my letter not only thought of you to make slight changes to informing your employees about taking shorter routes, but understanding the fact that not only should you advise your drivers on taking shorter routes for residents, but for those who don't reside on the island as well. Tourism is one of Hawaii's biggest investments and it would be a shame for them to go back home and explain to their family that the rides they used to travel was long and expensive for them. Because then that would slowly but surely take away money from the state as well as turn customers away from using your company as a mode of transportation. Which no one would ever want for their company.
I hope that my letter had shed some light on an issue that occasionally happens to not just me, but to others also. And urges you to make immediate changes by some form of great action to keep your company in business.
Sincerely,
Chelsea Matanguihan
Wednesday, December 11, 2013
Risky Business Final Essay
Did you know that suicide is the third leading cause of death among children, teens and young adults? Every year almost 125,000 children are brought to emergency rooms to receive treatment for injuries inflicted while attempting suicide. Girls think about and attempt suicide about twice as often as boys, and tend to attempt suicide by overdosing on drugs or cutting themselves. Yet boys die by suicide about four times as often girls, perhaps because they tend to use more lethal methods, such as firearms, hanging, or jumping from heights. The rates of teen suicide increases by the minute due to many issues such as family related issues, mood disorders and even bullying; which needs to be taken into consideration without delay.
There are a variety of reasons as to why teens feel need to commit or attempt suicide. According to Dr. Robert Wallace from creators.com, family factors are the most commonly cited cause; whether there had been a death, or divorce, or even financial problems, it slowly but surely makes a teens life turn a 180 within a matter of time. Being a teenager to have to deal with those problems in life is difficult to cope with; yet no teen should feel the need of having to resort to suicide. They feel as if dying is the only way of coping with their issue instead of dealing with it while being alive. Having a family related issue that leaves you in the need of committing suicide branches out from not just being only you, but to others who have the same problem and think that they should consider it as well.
Mood disorders is just another term for being bipolar and not only is it a symptom leading to depression, but it’s also a risk factor leading teens into attempting suicide. Mood disorders are reported to be the most common psychiatric illnesses in children and adolescents who attempt or commit suicide. Us teens may say that being bipolar is a normal disorder any teen will come across, but it’s not, it’s a condition that hints out to others that surround the teen to show that they are dealing with a certain crisis. It’s a silent universal sign from them that something is wrong and needed to be said in words rather than kept in their mind. Knowing that mood disorders is a common sign within teens who consider suicide, it shows that people everywhere need to take serious note of the symptom and contribute into preventing those who aren’t or are affected.
Being bullied doesn’t just give a student a hard time in focusing in school or at home, but majorly affects their intuition on living. Back in September, 12 year-old Rebecca Sedwick committed suicide due to bullying; both verbal-bullying and cyber-bullying. Being the personal punching bag on a bully brings out insecurities in one that can slowly be less tolerable than before; which what probably happened to Sedwick. Bullying is one of the vilest thing a person could do to one, and not caring about their life sentence; whether considering suicide or not; just brings it to an all-time low. Knowing that bullying causes some teens death, or if not more, doesn’t matter, what matters is the fact that their willing to put their life at risk without even completing at least 25% of their life span to explore other options that the world had to offer; only because they cut themselves short by someone who hadn’t given them an ounce of care to feel empathetic because their too pathetic themselves to even care.
Teen suicide is an issue that needs to be taken underway without delay so we can stop the increasing population if it. It’s the third leading cause of death among young adults, resulting in 4,400 deaths each year. And if it’s just the third leading cause, what is it going to take for us to make a change? Wait until it reaches the top of the scale and moving to the first leading cause? There are different ways to approach the issue to slowly solve it, whether it’s to build and spread more common hotlines within the nation, or setting up multiple classes within a state for teens to push themselves or be pushed to join and get help. But it’s up to us as bystanders to take an action and make the first move. That way the common causes, family factors, mood disorders, and bullying, would be dead to the world. And the only way to close off the issue is to take it one step at a time slowly but surely to lessen the suicides each year.
There are a variety of reasons as to why teens feel need to commit or attempt suicide. According to Dr. Robert Wallace from creators.com, family factors are the most commonly cited cause; whether there had been a death, or divorce, or even financial problems, it slowly but surely makes a teens life turn a 180 within a matter of time. Being a teenager to have to deal with those problems in life is difficult to cope with; yet no teen should feel the need of having to resort to suicide. They feel as if dying is the only way of coping with their issue instead of dealing with it while being alive. Having a family related issue that leaves you in the need of committing suicide branches out from not just being only you, but to others who have the same problem and think that they should consider it as well.
Mood disorders is just another term for being bipolar and not only is it a symptom leading to depression, but it’s also a risk factor leading teens into attempting suicide. Mood disorders are reported to be the most common psychiatric illnesses in children and adolescents who attempt or commit suicide. Us teens may say that being bipolar is a normal disorder any teen will come across, but it’s not, it’s a condition that hints out to others that surround the teen to show that they are dealing with a certain crisis. It’s a silent universal sign from them that something is wrong and needed to be said in words rather than kept in their mind. Knowing that mood disorders is a common sign within teens who consider suicide, it shows that people everywhere need to take serious note of the symptom and contribute into preventing those who aren’t or are affected.
Being bullied doesn’t just give a student a hard time in focusing in school or at home, but majorly affects their intuition on living. Back in September, 12 year-old Rebecca Sedwick committed suicide due to bullying; both verbal-bullying and cyber-bullying. Being the personal punching bag on a bully brings out insecurities in one that can slowly be less tolerable than before; which what probably happened to Sedwick. Bullying is one of the vilest thing a person could do to one, and not caring about their life sentence; whether considering suicide or not; just brings it to an all-time low. Knowing that bullying causes some teens death, or if not more, doesn’t matter, what matters is the fact that their willing to put their life at risk without even completing at least 25% of their life span to explore other options that the world had to offer; only because they cut themselves short by someone who hadn’t given them an ounce of care to feel empathetic because their too pathetic themselves to even care.
Teen suicide is an issue that needs to be taken underway without delay so we can stop the increasing population if it. It’s the third leading cause of death among young adults, resulting in 4,400 deaths each year. And if it’s just the third leading cause, what is it going to take for us to make a change? Wait until it reaches the top of the scale and moving to the first leading cause? There are different ways to approach the issue to slowly solve it, whether it’s to build and spread more common hotlines within the nation, or setting up multiple classes within a state for teens to push themselves or be pushed to join and get help. But it’s up to us as bystanders to take an action and make the first move. That way the common causes, family factors, mood disorders, and bullying, would be dead to the world. And the only way to close off the issue is to take it one step at a time slowly but surely to lessen the suicides each year.
Tuesday, December 10, 2013
Risky Business Final Essay
Did you know that suicide is the third leading cause of
death among children, teens and young adults? Every year almost 125,000
children are brought to emergency rooms to receive treatment for injuries
inflicted while attempting suicide. Girls think about and attempt suicide about
twice as often as boys, and tend to attempt suicide by overdosing on drugs or
cutting themselves. Yet boys die by suicide about four times as often girls,
perhaps because they tend to use more lethal methods, such as firearms, hanging,
or jumping from heights. The rates of teen suicide increases by the minute due
to many issues such as family related issues, mood disorders and even bullying;
which needs to be taken into consideration without delay.
There are a variety of reasons as to why teens feel need
to commit or attempt suicide. According to Dr. Robert Wallace from
creators.com, family factors are the most
commonly cited cause; whether there had been a death, or divorce, or
even financial problems, it slowly but surely makes a teens life turn a 180
within a matter of time. Being a teenager to have to deal with those
problems in life is difficult to cope with; yet no teen should feel the need of
having to resort to suicide. They feel as if dying is the only way of coping with
their issue instead of dealing with it while being alive. Having a family
related issue that leaves you in the need of committing suicide branches out
from not just being only you, but to others who have the same problem and think
that they should consider it as well.
Mood disorders is just another term for being bipolar and
not only is it a symptom leading to depression, but it’s also a risk factor leading
teens into attempting suicide. Mood disorders are reported to be the most
common psychiatric illnesses in children and adolescents who attempt or commit
suicide. Us teens may say that being bipolar is a normal disorder any teen will
come across, but it’s not, it’s a condition that hints out to others that
surround the teen to show that they are dealing with a certain crisis. It’s a
silent universal sign from them that something is wrong and needed to be said
in words rather than kept in their mind. Knowing that mood disorders is a common
sign within teens who consider suicide, it shows that people everywhere need to
take serious note of the symptom and contribute into preventing those who
aren’t or are affected.
Being bullied doesn’t just give a student a hard time in
focusing in school or at home, but majorly affects their intuition on living.
Back in September, 12 year-old Rebecca Sedwick committed suicide due to
bullying; both verbal-bullying and cyber-bullying. Being the personal punching
bag on a bully brings out insecurities in one that can slowly be less tolerable
than before; which what probably happened to Sedwick. Bullying is one of the vilest
thing a person could do to one, and not caring about their life sentence;
whether considering suicide or not; just brings it to an all-time low. Knowing
that bullying causes some teens death, or if not more, doesn’t matter, what
matters is the fact that their willing to put their life at risk without even
completing at least 25% of their life span to explore other options that the
world had to offer; only because they cut themselves short by someone who hadn’t
given them an ounce of care to feel empathetic because their too pathetic themselves
to even care.
Teen suicide is an issue that needs to be taken underway
without delay so we can stop the increasing population if it. It’s the third
leading cause of death among young adults, resulting in 4,400 deaths each year.
And if it’s just the third leading cause, what is it going to take for us to
make a change? Wait until it reaches the top of the scale and moving to the
first leading cause? There are different ways to approach the issue to slowly
solve it, whether it’s to build and spread more common hotlines within the
nation, or setting up multiple classes within a state for teens to push themselves
or be pushed to join and get help. But it’s up to us as bystanders to take an
action and make the first move. That way the common causes, family factors,
mood disorders, and bullying, would be dead to the world. And the only way to
close off the issue is to take it one step at a time slowly but surely to
lessen the suicides each year.
Monday, December 2, 2013
Argument Essay
Dear Cab Hawaii,
You are well known to the island of Oahu for providing a mode of transportation to not just only the residents of the island, but to the tourists who take the time to choose to enjoy their time here. You make it an easier way for the people to get from one destination to another faster than the bus.
Despite all of this, the routes I've have been taken to get to many of my destinations have been brought to my attention. About a month or two ago, I had a very important assignment to complete for school which was located at Pearlridge Shopping Center. My current location to get to Pearlridge was Waikele Premium Outlets so I could make it more convenient for my cab driver to pick me up from instead of my residential street. I somewhat remember that I got picked up within the time restraint given to me over the phone when calling for a cab. I do, however, clearly remember the route I was taken to get to my destination. And I was not very impressed with the route nor the ride.
Once I got into the cab, My driver confirmed and my name and destination in a pleasant way. But once we hit our first road while leaving, I noticed that I may given off my impression as a non-resident who wasn’t familiar with the island because he didn’t go straight to the freeway where we were aware of no traffic whatsoever, according to the radio. No, he went down Paiwa St. and kept going, passing the exit to the freeway and going straight to Kamehameha Highway. I was slowly feeling agitated because every time we were close to a stoplight, he would unusually slow down until the light turned yellow then red. And every time that happened, the price of my ride located on the dashboard kept rising. And all I could think about was the fact that he could’ve continued to actually going the speed limit he was always at.
So we arrived at Pearlridge within 25-30 minutes because he had "thought" I had said Uptown rather than Downtown when I clearly stated Downtown before we left Waikele. According to Google Maps, the longest a ride would ever have to take that was relative to my current location and destination was 15 to 20 minutes.
I understand economy nowadays is tough and being a working teenager I can say a lot. But cab drivers earn a lot considering their benefits. Not only do they get paid for their whole trip each time they drive their customer, they also receive tips. As well as being an employee; you also obtain a weekly or monthly salary while being employed at the CabHawaii.
I hope my letter not only thought of you to make slight changes to informing your employees about taking shorter routes, but understanding the fact that not only should you advise your drivers on taking shorter routes for residents, but for those who don't reside I the island also. Tourism is one of Hawaii's biggest investments and it would be a shame for them to go back home and explain to their family that the rides they used to travel was long and expensive for them. Because then that would slowly but surely take away money from the state as well as turn customers away from using your company as a mode of transportation. Which no one would ever want for their company.
I hope that my letter had shed some light on an issue that occasionally happens to not just me, but to others away. And urges you to make immediate changes by some form of great action to keep your company in business but addressing your address to the other side of your helpful solution.
Sincerely,
Chelsea Matanguihan
You are well known to the island of Oahu for providing a mode of transportation to not just only the residents of the island, but to the tourists who take the time to choose to enjoy their time here. You make it an easier way for the people to get from one destination to another faster than the bus.
Despite all of this, the routes I've have been taken to get to many of my destinations have been brought to my attention. About a month or two ago, I had a very important assignment to complete for school which was located at Pearlridge Shopping Center. My current location to get to Pearlridge was Waikele Premium Outlets so I could make it more convenient for my cab driver to pick me up from instead of my residential street. I somewhat remember that I got picked up within the time restraint given to me over the phone when calling for a cab. I do, however, clearly remember the route I was taken to get to my destination. And I was not very impressed with the route nor the ride.
Once I got into the cab, My driver confirmed and my name and destination in a pleasant way. But once we hit our first road while leaving, I noticed that I may given off my impression as a non-resident who wasn’t familiar with the island because he didn’t go straight to the freeway where we were aware of no traffic whatsoever, according to the radio. No, he went down Paiwa St. and kept going, passing the exit to the freeway and going straight to Kamehameha Highway. I was slowly feeling agitated because every time we were close to a stoplight, he would unusually slow down until the light turned yellow then red. And every time that happened, the price of my ride located on the dashboard kept rising. And all I could think about was the fact that he could’ve continued to actually going the speed limit he was always at.
So we arrived at Pearlridge within 25-30 minutes because he had "thought" I had said Uptown rather than Downtown when I clearly stated Downtown before we left Waikele. According to Google Maps, the longest a ride would ever have to take that was relative to my current location and destination was 15 to 20 minutes.
I understand economy nowadays is tough and being a working teenager I can say a lot. But cab drivers earn a lot considering their benefits. Not only do they get paid for their whole trip each time they drive their customer, they also receive tips. As well as being an employee; you also obtain a weekly or monthly salary while being employed at the CabHawaii.
I hope my letter not only thought of you to make slight changes to informing your employees about taking shorter routes, but understanding the fact that not only should you advise your drivers on taking shorter routes for residents, but for those who don't reside I the island also. Tourism is one of Hawaii's biggest investments and it would be a shame for them to go back home and explain to their family that the rides they used to travel was long and expensive for them. Because then that would slowly but surely take away money from the state as well as turn customers away from using your company as a mode of transportation. Which no one would ever want for their company.
I hope that my letter had shed some light on an issue that occasionally happens to not just me, but to others away. And urges you to make immediate changes by some form of great action to keep your company in business but addressing your address to the other side of your helpful solution.
Sincerely,
Chelsea Matanguihan
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